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So creative and fun. Loved hearing your speaking voice too Joshua. Gosh you could get a job reading audio books for both children and adults... if you're ever bored on your island paradise that is... 😊

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Jun 29·edited Jun 29Author

Thank you. With a mother from Liverpool and a father from Manchester, I was putting on my best northern accent for this poem. I also have my public school accent for other poems, and my 'Orson Welles' too. I do audio for the grandkids' books and they are always asking me to do funny accents.

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Brilliant. What a gift.

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How fun! :)

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Thank you Shelly. Glad you liked it. Maybe I'll have a look through Carol Duffy's book again and think of someone else she missed out.

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Fantastic Josh! So unique. I loved the reading. Your voice just fits this so well. Yes, that damn snake. The boys forgot the unicorns as well! Carol Duffy has got nothing on you! I love your wit and how are you tie all together with future relationships, and all!

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Ah, unicorns ... I should have fitted them in somewhere :( I cranked up my northern roots/accent for this one (me being a Lancastrian, mother from Liverpool, father from Manchester). Anyway, glad you liked it; of course Carol Duffy is a great inspiration, and her "Mrs Midas" is superb.

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I really appreciate how you encourage new perspectives without judgment. Thanks for the thoughtful food for thought you've shared.

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Thank you. It's nice to know when a poem manages to 'show and not tell', (if I've understood correctly that's what I did).

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Wonderfully witty and so filled with delightful nuance!

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Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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One of my favourite poems by one of my favourite poets 😊 💕

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That's a great combination then 💜

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